- first and foremostwhen looking at an essay, you're going to be looking things like, their ability to write well and their appropriation for college. but we're also using that information to kind of see things like, their resilience andtheir love of learning and their intellectual curiosity. - i always tell a student, you know,
if you had the chance to come meet with the admissions committee and present yourself in person, would you want to do it? and without fail students say, yeah i'd love to have that opportunity. and when i ask why? they say because if they were able to get know the admissions committee,
the admissions committee would want to admit because they would know them and they would get toknow what their about and what makes them unique and special. - the essay is reallyneat in that it's one of the only places in the application where they have complete control. where they can write about the things that they've been involved inand things that they've done.
- one piece of advice iwould give to every student is to ask someone whoknow's them a little bit, to read their essay and totell them what impressions they have of you after reading the essay. - i think the essays that work best are actually quite simple. i think students get really caught up in thinking that thisessay has to emcompass your entire life and ithas to be groundbreaking
and, you know, publishable quality. and that's a lot to askof a high school student. so i always advice students to stick to the simple things that you know. and the essays that standout the most in my mind are about simple, simple things, very everyday topics. - i have seen some amazing essays about things like studentswalking their dog,
or even their bus ride to school. - i think our hope isthat if a student were to drop the essay on thefloor of their high school and someone were to pick it up. it didn't have your name on it. that they'd say for sure, oh i know that is so and so's essay, because it speaks so much about your voice and your experiences and your perspective.
- i think my favoriteessay that i've ever read came from a student in the midwest. and he wrote about workingat a fast food restaurant. and he wrote about howpeople were treating him as they went through the drive through. and how he was treating them back. he called himself anundercover anthropologist, which admittedly was a little nerdy in a brown sort of way.
but i liked his essay because, i was able to see what he was seeing and feel what he was feeling. so for the purposes of the application, where we as admish officers are trying to get to know the applicant, that's a great essay.